You used too many default instruments! I can tell that you used FL Studio.
A tad too loud, friend
I really wanted to hear this one out, but the quality on the instruments/samples is really bad. Making it sound a tad distorted.
But I must ask: How did you make this wonderful piece of work!?
Lots of blood, sweat, and tears :)
And then East West Quantam Leap Symphonic Orchestra and Choirs plugged into Sibelius. The EWQLSO and EWQLSC you can find at www.soundsonline.com, and Sibelius I think is just Sibelius.com. All outstanding programs and gave me just about everything I ever needed to create music like this. Obviously, years of study and mistakes are going to refine things a bit :-P Just write lots, and lots, and lots of music, and try to do something ridiculous and wild, and if it doesn't work, fine. If it does work, however, it's ridiculous, wild, and you find that you'll really be proud of it.
Hope that answered your question :)
You just need to add more! Clear up the synths and piano. I want to hear a follow-up of this, William.
You've got the feel for it...
Just not the right sound samples and synths. I really feel like I understood what you were trying to do here so that's a big thumbs up.
Is a bit off. You should try and listen carefully and see if it sounds right to you. Also there's a lot of empty space there at the end with just the beat going.
2/10 because this is your first time.
lolo thanks. well. i guess its crappy quality thanking the.. 40 minutes i spent on this song or so haha. i need the full verison of FL to save it and maybe ill be able to make better songs. thanks anyways
I really felt that you could have done SO MUCH MORE with this song instead of just giving me the melody.
Ah, very nice
I really liked the eerie melody at the beginning around 00:40 you bring in a bit that just squeals evil! I'd like to see this themed with a bad guy from an anime.
Beautiful work. 7/10.
ARGH THE DISTORTION!
I'm sorry but I just COULD NOT handle the distortion! Turn down the decay on the reverb. That should help.
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